This is an essay for Project 1 (investigative field essay) on the corporate nature of the K-pop industry and how it affects both performers and fans.
By: Tyler Le
With the revision, the final product is greatly improved.
I added to my case study section because, while the original focused primarily on the benefits of the system, it did not address the negative effects as much as it should have. Furthermore, since the original draft, more supporting information has come out regarding Manon of Katseye and the fans. Specifically, I used an article on Manon's hiatus and consulted a primary source on fan reactions, using Instagram comments. This addition strengthens my argument by showing how the same commercial system that produces global success can also generate performer strain and highly parasocial fan behavior.
Additionally, while the original format was that of an essay, I tried to make it fit more of a web article aesthetic. I did this by adding pictures throughout the essay and adding many page breaks in order to make the article more readable and engaging for a modern audience. These design choices improve readability and better match the style of modern online media, helping the project communicate its ideas more effectively to a general audience.
This is an infographic for Project 2 (Multigenre Persuasive Campaign) focusing on why Circuit Zandvoort should remain on the Formula 1 calendar past the 2026 season. The infographic was made from the perspective of the Grand Prix Drivers' Association, a workers' union for Formula 1's drivers, and was made to appeal to the FIA, Formula 1's officiating organization.
The infographic focuses on eye-catching design and quick presentation of its main points. It was designed in Canva and features Zandvoort's track map, images of the drivers' association, and images of the safety car for visuals. It also includes famous driver opinions on the circuit and official company logos for credibility.
This was the preliminary Annotated Bibliography for Project 1. It's purpose was to find and analyze potential academic and popular sources for Project 1. It includes some of the sources used for Project 1, such as the research paper discussing the death of Jonghyun and the news article on Ejae, but also includes unused sources, such as the movie KPop Demon Hunters, that represent an earlier stage of the project.
For example, initially, I planned to include a discussion of how self-aware the industry can be, using the movie's symbolism, metaphors, and characters as an example of the industry's understanding of its own problems. However, this was ultimately cut in favor of the case study section on Katseye, which I felt strengthened my argument more than the potential movie section could.
How has/does/will your new understanding of genres, or your ability to 'read' different texts, visual artifacts, or situations rhetorically, affect how you interact with or think differently about these things, now or in the future? (Such as, in your other classes, in your personal interactions, while watching movies or reading books, looking at signs or ads or flyers, being convinced/not convinced to do something, etc)
My understanding of genres has improved a little bit. I think I have a better understanding of what makes a good genre, such as how to be eye-catching in a quick visual format. I would say that I am now more aware of when someone is trying to employ rhetorical strategies. This is why it is important to know rhetorical strategies, not only so you can use them, but also so you can know when they are being used against you.
How will you continue to write or compose in other classes or activities for your major, extracurriculars, personal life, etc?
I think the most important thing to do is to appeal to all of the rhetorical strategies at some point, especially for a persuasive essay, to make the most effective argument. For example, in my K-pop essay, I appealed to ethos by providing idol testimony, pathos by discussing their hardships and Jonghyun’s tragic death, logos by making logical arguments regarding their sleep schedules, and kairos by writing in a time of heightened awareness of the issues within the industry. In the future, when writing persuasive essays, I will make sure to cross off every rhetorical strategy and employ them efficiently.
What's a situation you've recently encountered in your life that you thought about rhetorically? Such as:
responding differently to 2 audiences
crafting a text message or email for a certain audience
using pathos in a group chat
thinking about the exigence of a weird situation
realizing when someone is employing a rhetorical strategy to convince you of something, etc.
There was a time when a friend of a friend was trying to get me to convert to his faith. Once this individual figured out that I was a Catholic, he tried to use my beliefs to support his faith and to see things from his point of view. I feel like this was a clear example of knowing your audience and logos, as he was trying to bridge my beliefs into his and making logical connections between his and my faith. There also may have been an appeal to ethos as well, as he may have been attempting to create credibility by knowing about Catholicism. Overall, I think I learned that anyone will use rhetorical strategies to get you to believe anything, and again, it is important to know when someone is trying to use rhetorical strategies to influence you.
As you work on projects for other classes in the future, how will you continue to think about audiences or discourse communities?
I will always be aware of who my audience is. For example, it is okay to use slang and contractions in order to appeal to your peers or younger people if they are your audience, but it is important to be aware of your audience if that is not the case. For example, a business audience and a science audience would have different writing and presentation norms. It is important to be aware of these norms when writing.
Do you plan to take any other writing courses? Courses that will require writing or creating different genre compositions? Creative writing courses?
I do not plan to take another writing course, but I would not be opposed to taking another one. If I did take one, I would prefer that it be something with a lot of creative freedom to write about what I want. For example, I found this course enjoyable because I was able to write about things I cared about, such as Formula 1 and K-pop. I feel like this is an important part of writing, and more courses should adopt an assignment structure where there is an emphasis on writing about anything you want. I feel like this would greatly improve students' perception of writing classes.